Presentation Feedback

Group 1

Pros

• Includes treatment, crew list, location list, shots, mise en scene, risk assessment - well explained and detailed
• explains story line - narrative video: shown through storyboard

 Questions:

• Where has the person with the guitar come from?
• and how does that fit into the story you're trying to portray?
• what happens within each scene?
• crew list? 

 
Group 2
Pros:
Includes:

• inspirations
• what the song is called
• the main ideas for the video
• shot list
• locations
• crew list
• mood board
• risk assessment 
• storyboard

Cons:
Needed a timeline analysis - have ideas but scattered






Group 3
Pros:
Includes:

• the song name and artist
• crew and cast
• location
• risk assessment
• shot list

Cons/Questions:

• Could have included more on mood board
• Know nothing about what the video is going to look like
• Don't know who its aimed at
• Don't know any existing ideas that you want to put into the video / no story line explained
• Needs more detailed mise en scene